Geez, Kylie, I didn't know that those PTSD nightmares can be so real. Can't even imagine how frightening that must feel.

On another note, this story is one of your best, in the literary sense. The images you conjure with your words are intense. When I read it, I had the impression I'm witnessing the metamorphosis from a promising caterpillar to an amazing butterfly.

If that shines through in your book project, you'll sure have an audience.